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Let's dance...

Post by Freeze » 09 Oct 2007, 20:21

PA, evo ovako... Pisem tekstove vec par godina, i imam ih gomilu... I hteo bih da cujem vase komentare. Ako su textovi OK, izbacivacu jedan po jedan svaki dan. Ako nisu, nista od toga... Anyway, temu sam otvorio sa naslovom "Let's dance...", pa cu i da pocnem od te pesmice... hehe... :D

Let's dance...


Slip into the shadows of Evertoon street,
You won't even hear a footsteps from my feet,
I'll hit you from the shadows, you won't feel my final blow,
You'll just feel your energy of life begins to flow.
Don't you even try to find a way to hide from me,
I'm a pro assasin from the shadows, can't you see ?
Unleashed from my leash, those dark streets are safe no more,
I'm dancing with the Devil, can't you see I start a war ?


CHORUS:
Let's dance...
I feel a blood thirst in my veins...
Telling me to start killing again...
I'm dancing with the dagger in my hand...
So dance...
I feel a blood thirst in my veins...
Telling me to start killing again...
I promise you in death you'll feel no pain...


I'm a frightning outlaw, everybody's looking for me,
Everybody wanders just how long I will be free,
I will be free... Just how long I do not know,
Fear from me... I'm your most lethal foe.

SOLO

CHORUS:

Now everyone is hiding into safety of their home,
They just do not know that in their homes they're not alone,
I am just waiting for the lights to fade away,
Then all sleeping beauties I will have to slay.
Finaly, they caught me, stopped my killing spree,
And I know till morning my soul will be set free,
At the end they told me that the hunter becomes prey,
I'll dance with the Devil till the end of this day!

CHORUS:


btw, ako neko hoce da napravimo bend, evo vam dobrog izvora dobrih textova na srpskom i engleskom... MENE! ! ! :lol:

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Post by Critical » 09 Oct 2007, 20:59

Dobar! 5 bambija :lol: :lol:

Ako nisi protiv mogu malo da "munem" (al' je dobar izraz,:)) ovaj txt da napravim neku ziku pride :lol:


Btw, jednu rec nisam razumeo ,sta je FOE?

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Post by Rocker. » 09 Oct 2007, 21:25

Foe-Neprijatelj

Tekst me podseca na Iron Maiden-Killers,ta je tematika u pitanju.Odakle ti inspiracija,da nisi mozda igrao Hitmen-a :)

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Post by Freeze » 10 Oct 2007, 10:29

Brate, muni je slobodno, ali ne zaboravi da u zagradi napises ( lyrics written by Petar Vukmanovic ). :D

Inspiraciju mi daju textovi DragonForce, HammerFall, Gamma Ray i Maideni... Evo josh necega:

Drifter

I'm just a lonely man,
I'm left alone,
Got nothing in my hands,
Whole life I'm on my own,
I've seen a thousand stars,
Each night I wait for dawn,
Each day I'm on my way,
I'm searching for my home...

Sometimes I wonder,
Why I'm even born,
I had to fight my way,
Until I've got grown,
I've seen a thousand faces,
Staring like I'm drown,
I've seen a thousand lakes,
But still not found my home...

Chorus:
I'm blind - for all who cannot see,
I'm deaf - for all alike to me,
I'm damned - for all that have lied,
I'm dead - for me no one cried...

And time passes by,
And I have grown so old,
There is no more sunshine,
All I feel is cold,
I'm starting my last trip,
And this one must be bold,
This is my final chance,
To find my long lost home...

Chorus


Kada budete citali ovu baladu, mislite na mene, ovo je my life story... A siguran sam da cu pogoditi josh nekog... And yeah, sledeci text je moj najbolji, ali da prvom vidim sta mislite o ovakvoj jednoj baladi koju sam dao danas... Peace

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Ako neko hoce, nije frka, mogu da napisem za 5min text po zelji, samo da mi date temu... Rly, nije frka... Srpski/Engleski, nije bitno... Samo je zelja bitna, i ljubav prema muzici...

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Post by dejankuki » 10 Oct 2007, 10:52

Freeze wrote:Ako neko hoce, nije frka, mogu da napisem za 5min text po zelji, samo da mi date temu... Rly, nije frka... Srpski/Engleski, nije bitno... Samo je zelja bitna, i ljubav prema muzici...

Hmmm, ovo je veoma zanimljivo.... nadam se da ces i imati koristo od toga. Imas moju punu podrsku...

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Post by Freeze » 10 Oct 2007, 20:54

Hehe... Bice ih josh gomila... ;)
Nego, sta se vise ovde slusa, posto sam relativno nov na forumu (mislim na balade/heavy/HC) ?

Sutra novi text, mozda i najlepsi ljubavni stihovi koje sam ikada napisao, a prve sam ih napisao... Sutra, cim ustanem...:lol:

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Post by Trooper » 10 Oct 2007, 22:16

Stvarno svaka cast za tekst. Ovo je po meni bas za neki gothic/sweet metal bend, sa vokalom poput Marylin Mansona

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Post by Freeze » 11 Oct 2007, 13:35

Ovo je kratko, jer pesma nije nikad dovrsena, ovo je samo refren. A necu da pravim strofe dok ne budem 100% siguran da je to - to sto hocu... Ima da se nacekam, moram da budem jako emotivno povredjen da bih ponovo napisao ovako nesto... :lol:

Ajde, dosta kukumakanja, evo pesme:

Have you ever thought of you and me,
Holding for hands and feeling so free,
Kissing with passion, defying them all,
Angels would cry, 'cause we are in love.
Changing the world, en-lightning the dark,
Laughing together, making a spark,
Our love would last, forever be young,
Love has no boundaries, forever be sung.

Ova pesma je posvecena mojoj bivsoj devojci...

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Post by Chord-Master » 11 Oct 2007, 14:42

Jeste kratko, ali je dobro.

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Post by Freeze » 12 Oct 2007, 12:50

Evo, josh jedne stvarcice koja podseca na onu prvu sto sam postovao... Ova se zove:

FAME HUNTER

I'm back, and I have tracked, Devil to his liar...
I'm gone, on my own, gonna find his trail...
I'm there, and now I swear, I will kill the beast,
You'll find, what's on my mind, you are on my list...

Chorus:
Get ready... Soon you'll know the pain,
Start running... Or else, die in vein,
Get ready... Soon you'll know the feel,
Start running... Or write your final will.

The beast, from deep abyss, is lost in my dream,
For two days, now it prays, to run away from Grim...
Stay put, how does it look, I'm on my way,
Who knows the next I chose, you better start to pray...

Chorus:

The ones who failed me once, have all known my wrath,
Stay sharp, you'd better start, to pack your things in cart...
If I freak, I will seek, a way to find your ass,
If I find a piece of mind, you'll even get my bless...

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Post by Trooper » 12 Oct 2007, 20:49

Svaka ti cast, ti mozes da pises sve...
Ovo je po meni nesto Pantera-like speed/trash

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Post by Freeze » 13 Oct 2007, 01:13

Posto sutra necu biti na netu, a obecao sam pesmu na dan, postovacu je sada, prosla je ponoc... Racunam kao da je sutra ! ;)

The Age of Magic and Might

The mist is obscure and my sight has grown blur,
Hear out the Ancients of Wild !
Enter our game and remember our name,
For once you can say that you tried.


Chorus:
Hear out our will,
Break up your seal,
Sing out our song,
That no one can hear,
Forget the silence,
That only you feel,
Tell us why Angel,
Shed silent tear.


Closing the gates of misfortune fates,
The age is of Magic and Might !
Glorious pleads of ones born to lead,
Hear out the call for final fight !


...You know that nothing will be as it was,
The gate of our fate is now closed !


SOLO


Chorus:

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