Tekstovi?

[Doolio]

reko da ubacim par tekstica, vidim niko se nije setio da nakaci, a i dok ne pazarim osnovne recording spravice, verovatno necu da kacim audio snimke. u principu sam pisao razne tekstove, od metal-like preko popa do hopa, za dosta ne znam ni gde su (uglavnom rap, posto sam to davno pisao). komentarisite, ali probajte objektivno, u smislu da posmatrate tekst u duhu samog teksta tj da su primedbe tipa 'ovde si kontradiktoran', 'ovo si glupo rekao', 'rima je nakalemljena', a ne 'tekst je gej', 'rep nije muzika' ili 'zasto psujes':)
luking forvard tu hir jor opinjons:)


A HUMAN

you wake up
in the morning
and you look
through the window
and you see
bunch of people
walking by

you drink your coffee
and smoke a fag
and you look
through the window
and you see
sun is shining
in the sky

taking time
in the shower
cause you know
this day is yours
you put a smile
on your face
and go outside

you walk the streets
and look around
see the world
that is blooming
and you think
to yourself
life's allright

but you know
what you know
you can see
how you feel
you're aware
that you
are spent

you live your life
by the book
you're pretty fit
your memory's good
and you can say
that you
are okay

you have friends
they have you too
and they can
count on you
all is good
and you can say
life's okay

you like your job
the pay is good
the boss is cool
co-workers too
and you can say
that every day
is okay

but you know
what you know
you can see
how you feel
you're aware
that you
are spent

but you know
what you know
you can see
how you feel
you're aware
that you
are spent

[Doolio]

CARPE DIEM

when the orange tree turns to grey
and little piper leaves it's shade
you will try to hum the tune
but it'll fade away so soon

seize the moment seize the day
the time wipes your life away
nothing lasts so act fast
everything submits to decay

if you ever see me cry
if you ever see me tied
don't you try to share the pain
'cause my life is mine to blame

if your life is much to bare
if there is no time to spare
if you can't strip off your pride
well i guess you never tried

maybe you're the same as me
you have travelled far and near
and if there's nothing left to see
you can come and die with me

when the orange tree turns to grey
and little piper leaves it's shade
you will try to hum the tune
but it'll fade away so soon

seize the moment seize the day
the time wipes your life away
nothing lasts so act fast
everything submits to decay

[Doolio]

REASON

tear my flesh and smash my bones
light your torch and burn my home
pierce my eyes and break my back
but you can never break me

hold me naked in a cell
put me through a living hell
make me scream in agony
but you can never break me

you can hang my family
destroy all things dear to me
make me suffer every day
but you can never break me

you can take away my pride
as i watch you rape my bride
shoot my children let them bleed
but you can never break me

go and spit on all my songs
show me that my faith is wrong
take away all of my dreams
but you can never break me

only one thing that i know
makes me stand up when i fall
i won't tell you what it is
and you can never break me

[Doolio]

THE TUNNEL

lying on the bed of smoke
wishing for an overdose
shackled by the lack of will
handicapped by selfesteem

never knowing what to start
never knowing what to quit
paralyzed by life itself
vegetating in a shell

filling lungs with poison fumes
drowning brain in heavy thoughts
tainted by experience
never feeling joy again

disarmed by false and selfish love
he closed his heart and burned his soul
his eyelids are sewn together
and his lips are sealed forever

clinging to a memory
not capable of letting go
caught in a constant loop
deep inside his vacuum zone

chasing feelings that are gone
he floats into oblivion
there's nothing new he would embrace
he's ready now to be erased

but he managed to survive
becoming too weak to die
with an instinct to persist
existing only to exist

only to exist

[Doolio]

OVERBONDED

our love has made us siamese
chained together by disease
if we separate we'll die
so we'll never dare to try
now we live our life it seems
shattering each other's dreams

[Doolio]

IMALI SMO SVE

imali smo sve
sve sto pozelimo
birali smo uloge
vodili ratove
sada trazimo
izbrisane tragove
imamo li snage
za jos korak il' dva

voleli smo sunce
osecali vetar
upijali smo kisu
disali sa zemljom
da li smo zaspali
zauvek
ne mozemo nazad
hocemo li napred

mi samo stojimo
zbunjeno stojimo
belo se gledamo
kako postojimo
da li se bojimo
da poletimo
ili ne umemo
da se setimo

ziveli smo zivot
sanjali smo snove
videli smo boje
culi smo muziku
zasto onda gluvi
sedimo u mraku
kako da se prenemo
kuda da krenemo

znali smo za ljubav
voleli smo radost
znali smo za mrznju
i mrzeli smo bol
prebrzo stavljamo
ruke u dzepove
da li moze neko
da nam dotakne dlanove

mi samo stojimo
zbunjeno stojimo
belo se gledamo
kako postojimo
da li se bojimo
da poletimo
ili ne umemo
da se setimo

[Doolio]

nasao sam jedan rep tekstic, ali cu ga okaciti kasnije, mrzi me da prekucavam, posto je na papiru...
eto, pa udrite junacki

[zolideathmetal]

Kao prvo...poludeo sam i za svaku pesmu cujem muziku u glavi O_o
Hahahaha

1. je pop, znaci neki klaviric, pevanje u prvi plan, spora emo muzika
2. je metallica, znaci malo tvrdji glas, malo distorzije i tako to
3.nesto tvrdje od 2.
4. nemam pojma dobar je text, ali ne cujem muziku iza hihihi
5. block out?

[KnightOfDoom]

Ta cetvrta je savrsena za neki instrumental. Prvo rokanje kao da ne postoji sutra pa se onda sve smiri, izrecituje text i nastavi sa rokanjem . Nesto kao Metallica-To Live Is To Die...taj fazon
Jos kad bi mi ustupio autorska prava za taj text, u zamenu za..hmm... protekciju na forumu?

[Doolio]

zbunjujete me, ima 6 tekstova, a ne 5 i sve mi se cini da je taj koji zovete 4 u stvari 5:)
mozda najbolje da se koriste naslovi u deskripciji:)

zoli, polovicno si u pravu:) evo ja cu po naslovima:

a human - tu postoji muzika, fazon je samo akustara koja se stramuje u nekom bluz-kantri fazonu (tipa A F#m E7 ili tako nesto), a za refren koji objasnjava da pesma u stvari nije vesela koristio sam neke malo blentavije polutonske prelaze.

carpe diem - za ovo isto imam muziku, ali nije nimalo agresivna:) vise bih opisao kao neki matori progresiv ili psihodeliju, tipa spore stvari od flojda.

reason - za ovo imam muziku u razvoju, uglavnom rifovi sa downstrokeovanim powerchordovima koji nisu mutovani, nazovimo to grunge meets manchester meets punk meets emo meets powermetal:)))

the tunnel - sa ovim sam se zezao i dosao sam do nekih akusticnih stramovanja, ali nisam bio zadovoljan, tako da mogu reci da za ovaj tekst nemam nikakvu muziku, mogu samo da kazem da meni najvise lici na neku thrash baladu, akusticnu po mogucstvu, ako ne to, onda slow rock.

overbonded - za ovo nemam bas nikakvu predstavu, bio je to jedan trenutak inspiracije za tekst i skontao sam da necu nista da dodajem iako je velicina prilicno haiku, ali kontam da sam zaokruzio celinu i da ne treba da se preseravam po svaku cenu. samim tim nemam pojma da li staviti agresivnu muziku ili depresivnu, ander ili mejn...

imali smo sve - )) nisam radio na muzici, ali jeste prilicno blokautasto, mada mene podseti pre na ekv, sto mu dodje otprilike to:)

najtofdum - ne znam na koju pesmu mislis, verovatno na overbonded, u svakom slucaju, slobodno se izivljavaj, jedino ako to planiras da izdas, samo napises da sam ja pisao tekst i mirna bosna, a ja zadrzim pravo da napravim svoju produkciju/aranzman na taj tekst nezavisno od tebe, posto je moj:) ako ti se stvarno svidja mozemo i zajedno da napravimo pesmu, otvoren sam za saradnju posto vec nekih desetak meseci uzaludno ocu da napravim bend vec sam prso i u fazonu sam da mi je kul da radim i one-shot 'projekte' sa drugim ljudima, samo da nesto radim. ono, imam milion tekstova, milion rifova, a nista ne realizujem...

[KnightOfDoom]

Da na tu sam pesmu mislio..ma Zoli me zbunio ... zbunjivac jedan....
A za ovo sve imas PP, da ti ne trujem temu .

[Bluesman]

Overboned je dobra bash zato sto je kratka! Da je duze ne bi bilo originalnosti, ima gomila tekstova gde sve crkava izumire odapne i istruli!

Ove ostale nisam detaljno citao bash zbog duzine, procitacu!

Neko spomenu haiku! Imao sam gomilu svojih haiku-a(eh ti casovi istorije), ako iskopam svesku okacicu. Uglavnom je bilo saljivo i blesavo. U istoj toj svesci imam i neke tekstove(RASMC-like, raspali po zezanju, bez smisla, i neke poruke).

Svidja mi se tema, ali ne verujem da cu skoro ista kaciti, jer ipak idem u matematicku(ko razume, shvatice)!:D:D

[Doolio]

sam si izabrao matematicku, sta da ti kazem:)))

ovaj, ocete da kacim jos mozda, ne vidim da je doslo do nekog masovnog odziva, ali stajaznam...?

[rider]

@Doolio

E hteo sam nesto da te pitam... Da li bi dao neke tekstove mom bendu koji snima album u skorije vreme... Naravno sve cemo se dogovriti ako si zaintersovan... (oko autorskih prava, novca i tako to)

[Mithrandir]

Nvm